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How To Write Better

February 17, 2014 Rodlie Ortiz, D.Min.

Would you like to learn to write better? Here are five things to keep in mind as you’re writing.

1. Shorter sentences are easier to read.

It’s sometimes fun to write long sentences, but more often than not they end up being hard to follow. Shorten up. Tighten up. Delete. It will be easier to read.

2. The word “that” is almost always unnecessary.

It’s true. Here’s a before and after sentence from my e-book:

Before: “What if there was a way that we could remember the resources that we read about or listened to?”

After: “What if there were a way we could remember the resources we read about or listened to?”

See the difference?

Here’s another.

Before: “I believe that blogging is the answer to that.”

After: “I believe blogging is the answer.”

You can delete most instances of the word “that.”

3. Use “I think” sparingly.

You either know or you don’t know. If you’re writing something, it should be from a place of authority. Using “I think” weakens your writing.

4. “Of course” can be greatly overused.

5. Avoid the passive voice.

You can identify when a sentence is written in the passive voice by the use of a “to be” verb. Check out this article for more information.

What’s the bottom line?

To be honest, reading about writing sometimes makes me self-conscious about my own writing. <——Was that sentence passive?!! See what I mean? Here’s what I think is more valuable: actually writing.

You can always hire an editor. You can always get people to help with the details. Sure, you want a certain level of self-awareness in your writing so you’re not constantly making elementary mistakes all the time, but not enough that it will make you second guess whether you should be writing at all.

By the way, make sure to check out Grammarly. It will help you in your writing. And here is a great blog post for some extra tips on writing.

So what about you? What are your best tips for writing better? What are the most common mistakes you make? (To leave a comment click here)

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About Rodlie Ortiz, D.Min.

On the pastoral team at Pioneer Memorial Church on the campus of Andrews University. Tech geek.

Comments

  1. Ben Nichols says

    February 17, 2014 at 5:30 pm

    Great article, Rodlie. I’ve been thinking about this for a while too. One thing that’s helping is the book “On Writing Well” by William Zinsser. He brings up a lot of great advice for good writing. Another help if you’re writing in WordPress is the Proofreading module in JetPack. If you go into the settings, you can have it check for passive verbs, hidden verbs, and a dozen other advanced proofreading functions. But as you mentioned, the biggest thing is to just write. I definitely need to start writing more!

    • Rodlie Ortiz says

      March 3, 2014 at 11:37 am

      Hmm….I think I’ll have to check out that WordPress app. That book sounds good as well. Thanks!

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